第三部分：写作

第一节：短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该

行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用

斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的下画一模线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

Dear Ms. Smith.

I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of 56.____________

camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After 57. ____________

that. you always gave me specially attention and inspired 58. ____________

to me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know 59. ____________

the other campers. Because the help you gave me that summer. 60. ____________

my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back 61. ____________

to school as new person. My grades improved. I became 62. ____________

very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that 63. ____________

said I had been admitting to a college. I am proud of it. I just 64. ____________

want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person. 65. ____________

Yours,

Bob

66．

假设你是李华，在出国交流学习期间，到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影，但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。

1．因广告过多，影片放映晚点；

2．影片播放音量过大；

3．安全出口标识不明，存在安全隐患；

4．适当结尾。

注意：

1．词数：80—120；

2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；

3．信的开头已为你写好（不计入词数）。

参考词汇： 安全出口 — exit

安全隐患 — potential safety hazard

Dear Manager,

I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua